Week four-wednesday 27/01/16

Today I broke down my synopsis into different parts by highlighting the parts and I am going to expand on them to help me set the layout for my story. the next thing that I need to do is expand on my story. In alma’s session we carried on doing our storyboard by using the templates we were given and building up our story ready for it to be filmed later on in the term. when I was doing my layout for my story I use different techniques to make some of the story look spooky.

Work

A damp wooden house with an eerie ghost sound echoing through the dark gloomy house… But where is the eerie ghost sound coming from? There is the sound of breaking glass. They hear a sound that triggers a past that is running through their minds. But who is it? Ever since their mum died. They go back on that day. Should they carry on going through the house and seeing more shadows?   The door slammed opened, but the shadow was gone when they turned their backs. But was it someone they knew? Who are the shadows? They have managed to escape into the forest. The light is fading; there is no way to escape out of the forest.

They are walking through the cold dark scary forest when they see bright flashing lights. But what are the bright lights shining at? Is the shadow animal or a person? They won’t find this out until they get closer to the flashing lights and see the shadow more clearly. But when they reach the end of the flashing light. The shadow has disappeared. But where has it gone?   Was it someone from their past talking to them through the rustling trees?   Something is coming and there is no escape. What are they going to do next? Will they live or not? Do they have any help or not? What happens if they get separated? Will they find each other in the forest?

My story that I started expanding

A damp wooden house with a loud eerie ghost sound that is echoing through the dark gloomy house which is horrible and smells like a dead rat. But where is the eerie ghost sound coming from?  There is the sound of breaking glass. the glass has smashed into different tiny pieces  They hear a sound that triggers a past that is running through their minds. But who is it? Ever since their mum died. They go back on that day. Should they carry on going through the house and seeing more shadows?   The door slammed opened, but the shadow was gone when they turned their backs. But was it someone they knew? Who are the shadows? They have managed to escape into the forest. The light is fading; there is no way to escape out of the forest.

They are walking through the cold dark scary forest when they see bright flashing lights. But what are the bright lights shining at? Is the shadow animal or a person? They won’t find this out until they get closer to the flashing lights and see the shadow more clearly. But when they reach the end of the flashing light. The shadow has disappeared. But where has it gone?   Was it someone from their past talking to them through the rustling trees?   Something is coming and there is no escape. What are they going to do next? Will they live or not? Do they have any help or not? What happens if they get separated? Will they find each other in the forest?

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