Week 9- Tuesday 8/03/16

Today i finished off my story. then I started to design my characters and the sets that I am going to make for my video.



 Not her reflection 


On a warm, dark beautiful evening, a young girl called Bella, who has long curly blonde hair and blue eye, she is five foot tall and the oldest. Bella is very bossy and she was walking along a small town with only a few houses in South Africa called Cape Town with her brother David, who has black hair and brown eyes. He is four foot tall and shy to speak to people outside his family. They were walking towards the big forest with lots of green trees and ferns with lots of sticking up grass and a tiny path to walk along. When they were walking along the forest, the sticks were breaking underneath their feet As soon as they got to the centre of the forest, they suddenly bumped into their best friends Emily, who has short black curly hair and hazel brown eyes, she is five feet tall, calm and patient and Jack, who has blonde hair and blue eyes. He is five feet tall and shy. Suddenly, they stopped and stared into the distance. But what were they looking at? All of a sudden, they saw bright orange flashing lights in the sky. Where were the lights coming from? So they all decided to follow the lights, which led them to their old, wooden, damp house with broken windows and glass on the floor and the house smells like a dead rat, where they used to live before their mum died two years ago. All of them decided to open the creaking door to see what was inside the house and to see if it is still the same.  They closed the door behind them and carried on exploring the house. But they hear an eerie ghost sound that is echoing through the house that sounds like their mum because it is a soft voice. Every time, they turned on the lights and they see different shadows of their mum. They think it is their mum because they recognized the locket that their mum was wearing before she passed away. They are still trying to figure out where the sound was coming from. All of a sudden they decided to walk into the front room, where they see a shadow of a ghost through the mirror, which looked like their mum. All of them stood there for a while to see where the reflection was coming. While they were trying to figure out the reflection, Bang! The door slammed open but who opened the door. Suddenly, they realise the reflection of the ghost was coming from outside and it was showing on the mirror because the light was shining on the shadow to make the reflection. In a split second, they hear a voice that sounds like their mum is speaking saying that they only have five minutes to escape, so all of them decide to run out of the house and back into the forest where the boys end up getting lost deeper and deeper into the forest away from the girls. All of a sudden, the girls panic madly because they can’t find the boys anywhere. So Bella and Emily are searching all of the big forest to see if they can find the boys. But the girls find two still bodies, where their brothers had been shot in their heads by a ghost figure that has disappear. The girls starts sobbing their hearts out because they have to call their dad to tell them that the boys have died. So the girls slowly walks home while reporting the incident to the police and describing every detail of what had happen. So they can find the murderer who killed their brothers. When they get home, they find a surprise in the bright and tidy kitchen that their step dad brought them. The surprise was that they find a  pink lantern on the table with  black pen messages on, that they can send up to heaven to their  beautiful brothers. When the lantern got sent up to their brothers, the girls hugged each other to cry on each other’s shoulders because they are missing their brothers while sending the lantern up to their brothers.


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